He says. She says.

June 12, 2010

pulsating disapproval.
emanates. radiates.
“I should leave,”
He says.

spiraling disappointment.
sinking. imploding.
“I’m sorry,”
She says.

obliging disclaimer.
transparent. insincere.
“No expectations,”
He says.

hiding dismay.
squeezing. hurting.
“I understand,”
She says.

The End.


One comment

  1. Wow. Powerful, Torie! You strike me with the amount of emotion you can evoke with a few, well-chosen words. Excellent!

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